My Stories

I write adventures for those in search of a good story. My novels fall in the Fantasy genre, but many people consider them Sci-fi too. Each story is written with what I look for when I read a book: action, adventure, twists and turns, love, heroes, vicious enemies, fighting (weapons and hand to hand combat). I write because I want to share the stories that are inside of me. I hope you enjoy the adventures as much as I love writing them!

Thursday, November 29, 2018

Cover for "Orbs of Fire"

Creating the cover for this book was so easy and yet so difficult.  Once I had decided on the title and subtitle I knew exactly what I wanted to do for the cover - obviously, the cover would be the Orb of Fire.   I published two other attempts at orbs of fire before I created the one that you see now.  I kept trying to use photos of fire (in my head that was the perfect way to do it).  Each attempt was close, but not at all the way I had envisioned.  (Apparently, fire is not the same as what I envisioned.  I was a little disheartened, but it didn't suck.)   I was actually working on another project when I stumbled onto how to create what I wanted, and even then I did not expect it to turn out so perfectly.  (So much fun making fire from scratch)

 Below are the three covers:


Above is my first attempt, using a picture of fire.


Above is my second attempt, using a picture of fire and then highlighting the brighter tones and darkening the redder tones.


Above is the final cover, which I created from scratch and am most proud of!

Tuesday, November 27, 2018

Writing Alex

I see Alex so clearly in my head that I never questioned if I wrote him right or wrong.  Everything from his black hair and goatee to his confident demeanor to his kindness towards Sonia and her family.  Alex is known throughout Lord Vertas' land.  There is no one in the land whose skills with a sword rival his.   Even Lord Vertas has great respect for him.  So much so that Alex is able to persuade him from killing Sonia's father.

I love Alex for his skills, his patience with Sonia, his ease at dealing with people, his desire for Sonia to become the best swordsman she can, and his wisdom.  One of my favorite interactions between him and Sonia is when he is practicing with her.  He keeps her on her toes and pushes her to be her best, but continuously says "dead" when the bout is over.  Dead meaning she has lost, because if it had been a real fight, she would be dead.

After Sonia's encounter with the Ortal and orbs of fire, Alex notices things have changed.  It doesn't prevent him from helping her attain her goal, but the reality of what is going on becomes hard to ignore.  And the things that were hidden, and had gone unnoticed, begin to seep into their mentor/student relationship, changing the dynamic between them.  Just one more unexpected thing to add to what should have been a simple journey of getting Sonia to the Tournament.


Sunday, November 25, 2018

Writing Sonia

Sonia is a strong young woman whose mother disappeared when she was very young.  Her father (Jack) raised her and her sister (Krissy) the best he could.   She has spent almost her whole life learning the way of the sword.  It is a passion that blossomed inside of her the first day she saw Alex practicing in a field alone.  It is a passion that her father has tried to forbid her from having.  A passion that her sister doesn't understand and despises.  It is a passion that no one in her village thinks she should follow.  Sonia, however, doesn't care what anyone else thinks.  One of the reasons she strives to be the best is because she wants to protect her family.  Even though the of her mother's disappearance is a mystery, Sonia refuses to believe that her family will be safe if she were to follow in her sister's footsteps - being a "proper" lady, wearing dresses, and searching for a husband.

Sonia has a strong will and passionate heart, which is what intrigued Alex.  Despite Jack's wishes for his daughter to not take part in learning how to use a sword, Alex encourages her and takes her to her first Tournament.  (The Tournaments is a platform for anyone who is skilled with a sword to compete for riches and a special gift from Lord Vertas.)  It is at that Tournament that her obsession roots itself in her.  She is a young child when she attends, but she knows she is going to take part and win one day.  Her resolve to never be helpless, to be the best swordsman, to always have the strength to protect her family becomes unwavering.   Even when she encounters the orbs of fire.

As with most stories I write, Sonia encounters more than one person should have to.   And unfortunately, the things she encounters are not what she is prepared for.  First the Ortal (creatures rumored to hate trespassers and are able to tear people into pieces) followed immediately by the orbs of fire.  From that moment on, Sonia's eyes are opened to a world she had never considered existed.   With the Tournament quickly approaching, everything around her seems to be trying to prevent her from doing so.  Her determination to be in the Tournament keeps her focused.  It's all she's ever wanted, and nothing's going to keep her away.

Plus, with a mentor like Alex in her corner, I wouldn't lose sight of my goal either.  ðŸ˜‰



Wednesday, November 7, 2018

Writing "Orbs of Fire"

"Orbs of Fire" was born from a dream I had one night while I was camping with my family at Hartwick Pines State Park.  I had no intention of writing a new story.  However, I woke up one morning early in the week, clinging to a small piece of the dream I had awakened from.  Not able to release the pictures in my head, I hurried out of the tent, made myself some hot chocolate, and started writing.  I spent the rest of the week, when everyone else was just sitting around camp, writing.  I think I wrote fifty pages during the rest of our stay.   It's crazy to me how my brain took the details of the dream and created a story with dragons, swords, and a tournament - none of which was in the dream.  The love story part is pretty much the only part that I can attach to the dream I had.   One small idea made everything so vivid in my mind: Alex's black hair and dark eyes, Sonia's determination, the fire in the orbs of the Shadow Dragon, each dark creature that Sonia encounters, Storm...

When I sat down to write "Orbs of Fire" I had no idea how much the story would grow.  It had originally seemed it was all about getting Sonia to the Tournament.  (Which had almost been the title of this book... Well, it was going to have Tournament in the title.)  However, by the time I had finished Orbs of Fire, it was clear that this story was about more than just Sonia's journey to the Tournament.  I just didn't know how much until I wrote the end of the Tournament and the story continued.  My cousin was reading this book for me in one of the many drafts and she pointed out that even though the story continued, the book shouldn't go beyond the Tournament, otherwise the Tournament seemed insignificant, and it wasn't.  So taking her opinion into account, I re-read the story and agreed.  Which, I'll admit, was nice to have book one finished and book two well on its way to being finished.

One of the coolest things for me about writing 'The Shadow Dragon" was I really wasn't a reader of dragon books.  I believe the only dragon book I had read was "Eragon", by Christopher Paolini (and that was years ago).  The only reason I had read that one was because I saw the movie and had a hundred questions after watching it.  I like to say the movie is a great trailer for the book.  Anyways,  the fact that "The Shadow Dragon" was in my head at all blew me away.  I mean sword tournaments, dragons, lord's, Ancients...  Not my realm at all.  Or so I thought, but "The Shadow Dragon" trilogy is a fan favorite, proving me wrong once again.

Thursday, November 1, 2018

The month of November: "The Shadow Dragon: Orbs of Fire"

This month I will be writing about "The Shadow Dragon: Orbs of Fire".  This was not my third story I wrote, it's actually Story 5. It is, however, the third book I published.  ðŸ˜Š

Here are the basic things about this book:
Genre: Adventure/Fanatsy/Young Adult

Age: 10 and up.
(I let my kids read them when they were 10. There is suggestive language and mild violence so it's a parental choice. My kids really enjoyed the adventure and characters as do all my fans which spread across the spectrum from preteen to seniors)
Published: 2012
What it's about: 
Here's the official blurb: 

  • Short: Before the sun rises, Sonia comes face to face with creatures that few have ever lived to talk about. She has been training since she was a child and knows she will fight to survive the encounter. Nothing could have prepared her for the orbs of fire that appear, burning bright against the darkness that surrounds them, nor the journey that is laid out before her
  • Long: When I was a child Alex took me to a Tournament, and ever since then I have been driven to become the greatest swordsman in all of Lord Vertas’ land. Alex taught me that to be a noteworthy swordsman I would have to train every day and endure the adversity of the world around me. However when orbs of fire make their presence known to me, my eyes are opened to a world that I didn’t know existed. A world where there are more than just mortals attempting to influence my future. Now, I must discover what is really important…if it’s not too late.  

Who: 
Sonia
Alex
Marty
Phillip

Where:
This story takes place on a world of sword tournaments, where dragons are thought to only exist in stories.  

I think that covers the blah blah blah part of the book, if you have questions or want more information feel free to ask.  

Wednesday, October 31, 2018

A personal achievement




Over the weekend I tested and received my yellow sash.  One step closer to become more like the awesome women I write about. 😊  It was such an accomplishment for me, one that I worked hard  for, one that until about a year ago I never thought would become a part of my life.  (I should have known better since I love Tai Chi so much.) Ranking up hasn't ever been one of my goals - as long as I'm learning and improving, that is my goal - and I not prepared for how proud I was going to feel after I tested.  I am a student at the School for Marital Arts, and it is such a perfect fit into my life.  It is helping me become stronger inside and out.  The outside I had expected, and the inside I should have given how much Tai Chi has impacted me, but I didn't.  The instructors there are a beautiful blend of wisdom, strength, serious, and humor.  I remember as a kid, my sister had this poster which said, "There is nothing as strong as true gentleness, and nothing as gentle as real strength."  It was probably one of the first quotes I had ever read that grabbed tight to my heart, and I am pretty positive that it comes out in my writing.   The instructors at this Dojo, they embody this.  

Before I became a student, my daughter was a student (still is), and Mr. Donahue said to the Wushu class, "Better to be a warrior in a garden than a gardener in a war."  And I knew in that moment she was in the right place.  Every time I hear that quote it resonates within me.  I am not a fighter, but I have discovered through my practice that the strength to be if I needed it is there, and I am inspired to work hard to strengthen it.  Along with the strenuous physical test for yellow sash, we also had to write a paper (hopefully one day I will post it).  I almost think the paper was more stressful than the actual test.  I know, I'm a writer, it should have been easy.  However, there was so much that needed to be said, and it would seem that I can write either a few sentences or thousands of words, but I was supposed to write two pages.  Two pages to sum up my passion and everything that Marital Arts has done for me, why I continue to practice.  It was very similar to trying to write the blurb for each book I write.  It feels so impossible. However I did write it (shrunk the font a little to fit it on two pages).  One of the things I realized while writing was that it is the people in my stories that helped draw me in.  Marital Arts has slowly rooted itself in me over the last nine years, proving to me that the universe is patient and wise. [Of all the things that inspired me: my writing, Tai Chi, Mediation, it was my daughter that was the biggest inspiration].  I am in awe of how I have written Martial Arts into my books with so little knowledge of it, and I am even more amazed how stepping into the practice is actually helping me become the person I want to be. The writing of strong warriors and the balance that they find, it is a full circle.  Was it in me all this time, or the people in my stories?   I'm sure I'll never know, but I am glad to be at this point, and I am excited to see where this path takes me next.

Sunday, October 21, 2018

A scene in "Solace: Lost" created by music

Opposite of my last post, this scene was truly inspired by music.  I wasn't struggling to write it, or need help.  In fact, I wasn't to this particular part of the story yet.  And when the idea came to mind, I wasn't sitting at my computer.   I was in my car driving to a spot I like to hike.  I was listening to one of the CD's that I made from my iTunes music, looking forward to my walk in the woods, watching the road (it was a dirt road and it had rained recently).   I wasn't even thinking about the story, but as the music started playing, my thoughts slid into what is known in the book as the Tamisa.  [The Tamisa is an event that happens on the (Zarran world) where the universe provides answers to the Zarran's questions that they have, to help them chose the right path, and help them see the person that is most important to them (their soulmate).] Everyone in the Zarran village gathers, those with questions or seeking their soulmate move to the center of those that have gathered,  and when the Tamisa begins, a rhythm is felt within each of them.  So here I am in my car and the song "Santa Maria (Del Buen Ayre)", by Gotan Project, begins and this whole amazing image moves through my mind.

To my amazement, the song that played next on my CD continued the story.

In the space between one song ending and the other beginning the universe provides Karissa with the information that she yearns for, but before she can decide how to digest it, the moment is interrupted.  And this is when the next song begins: "Secrets", by One Republic.  The interruption brings reality back to Karissa and she runs from the Tamisa, refusing to acknowledge the truth she had been shown.  As the song, plays I can vividly see her running through the forest and falling with emotions I can feel: sadness, confusion, and frustration.   Jack finds her here, hoping to help Karissa accept what the universe has shown her.   She falls back on the one thing that has always protected her and unleashes it all on him, discovering something that can no longer be ignored.

I so want to share more about this scene, but I don't want to spoil it for those of you who haven't read "Solace".   It's a part of the story that I hope those who have read the books, love as much as I do.  ðŸ˜Š


Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Music for a scene in Solace: Lost

As I said last month, music did have an impact on a couple of scenes in "Solace Lost".

In an important scene in the story, I was stuck.  I had "Lost" written up to a point near the end and I had the end completed, which means there was a bridge that I needed to write. I call it a bridge, because I need to get from one place to another where clearly something is missing - there is a gap.   Anyways, the bridge I had to write eluded me, and it drove me crazy.  I knew what I wanted to happen in that scene, but I could not see it clearly.  It took a few days before it dawned on me that I should put some music on.  Yep, that was all it took.  Once I found the right combination of songs, it didn't take me long to put the scene into words.  The songs I played over and over to write it were:

  • "Smack my Bitch Up", by Prodigy  
  • "Killing in the name of", by Rage against the Machine
  • "Whatever", by Godsmack
  • "Bodies", by Drowning Pool
  • "Living Dead Girl", Rob Zombie

Yes, the scene is a fight scene.    The Prodigy song was probably reeated the most because of the way the song slowly and picks back up...  it helped make the sunset and its affect on Karissa much more vivid. I'd love to tell you about it, but I don't want to spoil it.  I think by the time the reader gets to this part of the story, maybe even before, they are wanting this battle. 

Saturday, October 13, 2018

Writing "Solace: Lost"

Writing "Lost" only took me a week longer to write than "Uncharted Territories" (and it is almost twice as long).    It's funny to me how easy it was to write Solace compared to my other stories.  Not that my other stories have been difficult, it's just there's are so many other things I get distracted by.  And I don't mean non-writer world stuff, which does get in the way sometimes, but not nearly as much as with my other stories.  I like telling people the voices in my head directs me to where I write next.  (The voices being the people in my other stories)  It sounds crazy, I know, but...  it is what it is.   The reason I tell you this is so I can share what I think is funny about how quickly I wrote Solace.   When I think about it, it's rather fitting that Karissa's story was never interrupted while I was writing it.  Not one other voice tried to be heard.  And I think that it's because she is  the strongest and most stubborn female (main female) that I've written.   Which leads me to my theory that she kept all the voices of my other stories at bay until I finished.  I mean she is that badass. (Forgive my language.)  

Another interesting fact about writing "Lost": When I had finished writing book one, I didn't have a book two in mind.  I realize the end of "Uncharted Territories" leaves opportunity for a book two, and I remember thinking it would be cool to write more, but "Lost" wasn't even a glimmer of a thought.    I finished and published "The Shadow Dragon: Orbs of Fire", wrote and published "The Shadow Dragon: Aleksertac" before I wrote and published "Solace: Lost".  

The sub-title "Lost" came much easier to me than "Uncharted Territories".   With all that Karissa's been through she has always known what she had to do.  Then she met Jack.  Now that she has gone through uncharted territory, her reality has changed so much.  And even though she knows what she wants to do, she isn't sure how to accomplish it.  She is faced with bouts of weakness because Tania (one of her older sister's) had poisoned her, things she doesn't comprehend because she wasn't raised around them, and confronted with things - good and bad - that she never imagined she would.   And to make everything worse her compass of what needs to get done so she survives, has been broken by a creature named Jack, leaving her...  Lost.    


  • Plus, I love how well going into uncharted territories leads right into being lost.
😊







Tuesday, October 2, 2018

Month of October: Solace(book2): Lost

This month I will continue with Solace and focus on book 2 "Solace: Lost".

Here are the basic things about this book:


Genre: Adventure/Fanatsy/Young Adult

Age: 10 and up.(I let my kids read them when they were 10. There is suggestive language and mild violence so it's a parental choice. My kids really enjoyed the adventure and characters as do all my fans which spread across the spectrum from preteen to seniors)


Published: 2013


What it's about: 
Here's the official blurb: 
  • Short: When I met Jack, my life changed in a way that I hadn’t expected. By using the one thing that I was raised to believe was evil, he gained me my freedom. I have no idea what will happen now, but I do know that I must protect Jack from my sisters, from Omatha, and most importantly…me.
  • Long: Lost is something Karissa has never been…until she met Jack. He awakened a truth that Omatha had never allowed, causing Karissa to enter into uncharted territory. Even with all her experience she is left struggling to find her way. She cannot fathom the events that have occurred. Events that have left her struggling with an inflicted weakness, battling those who want to collect the bounty on her life, fighting against a new evil, and through it all trying to figure out how she can keep Jack safe. Will Karissa be able to protect Jack from the evils that are hunting her without destroying him herself?

Who: 
Karissa: Omathan/Zarran (female)
Jack: Human (male)
Omatha: Omathan (female)
Sarsa: Omathan (female)
Torrel: Zarran (male)
Stazta: Zarran (Female)
Marsel: Zarran (Male)
Rekusa: Unknown

Where:Traveling through space, stopping on a few worlds before reaching Zynnat.

I think that covers the blah blah blah part of the book, if you have questions or want more information feel free to ask.  

Sunday, September 30, 2018

The cover of Solace: Unchated Territory

I didn't get a chance to go into the cover art for Taken, but it's important to me that I do go into cover art.  I know you can't judge a book by its cover, and I don't.  However, to me, the cover is important.  I love when I'm reading a book and I get to a part where I have to stop reading and glance at the cover.  In that moment,  I think "oh, that's cool!" or "now it makes sense!"   It's probably a just me thing,  but I love it.  ðŸ˜Š  So of course, now that I'm in charge of making the cover, I do my best to put a part of the story on the cover.  





The picture above was my first attempt at the cover of "Solace: Uncharted Territory".  The concept had lots of potential, however it is horribly done here.   This was my very first time attempting to make a cover.  The covers for "Taken" were done by a friend of my sister, Tammy Boneburg.  And I loved them, but cover art is expensive even when you're getting a discount.   Plus, more importantly, I had this awesome idea in my head that I really wanted to tap into.  Obviously, I didn't have the skills nor the software.  

This cover never made it to paperback, and I have no doubt that it would have been changed much quicker if I had attempted to use it on a printed copy.  (I've discovered printed covers show a lot more flaws than ebook covers.)   Anyways, the whole concept I was trying to reach across was  that they were on the planet in the Middle of Nowhere (The sky is grey, there's fog that sinks down hiding everything around you, the black trees with branches that have sharp points and no leaves...) and the orange chain that binds them together is "vividly" seen because that is a big deal to me, especially since it's the reason Jack and Karissa don't kill each other.   So there it is.   My failed attempt to portray something I see so clearly in my head.  


Moving forward, I came up with the present cover (pictured above) while trying to create a cover for Solace: Lost.  I had been working on another project at the time (I want to say it was "Not Human" because that was the next and last cover I made with my Dell computer) and I was going back and forth between the two, trying to come up with cover art and titles.   It's kind of funny how I can remember vividly that I was at my oldest son's middle school football game, but I can't remember what exactly I was working on.  Except that the new concept hit me, and I was so excited I couldn't wait to get home.   I knew exactly how to tie the two covers for "Solace" together.  The cover is an image that Jack and Karissa see before they crash land on the planet in the Middle of Nowhere.  The ship had begun to spiral out of control, and when Karissa looks up at the window she sees, not the dark inky universe, but different shades of grey spiraling.  I then, easily, decided that the title had to remain orange because of the chain (I still refuse to let go of that).  The cover was perfect for this book because the landing on this planet and the orange chain result in an outcome that is far from Karissa's expectations.  Giving the subtitle dual meaning.   She is both externally and internally in uncharted territory.  




Wednesday, September 26, 2018

One of my favorite parts in Solace:Uncharted Territory

Picking a favorite part of this story is like trying to pick my favorite story that I've written, impossible.   However, the part below is one of my favorites because I love the way Jack (or as Karissa calls him: Creature) handles the situation he is in: calm and collected with a touch of humor.  Plus, in this part of the story, we get another glimpse of something that intrigues Karissa, something that doesn't have to do with violence.   

The part below happens before the Tirrapps find them.  Karissa is looking through the information she has on the people of Earth.  She is bored because Jack is unconscious from what she has done to him so he could survive outside of Earth's atmosphere and to prevent him from dying of malnourishment.  But more importantly, because Karissa decided to do an experiment with him, solely for her own curiosity and need for entertainment:  


    I began watching clips that showed how their fragile bodies were capable of defending and attacking - they used to know how to wield bladed weapons, but their fragile bodies didn’t want the honor of hand to hand combat and moved to guns. I continued watching how they lived every day. How they reproduced, showed anger, and... affection. I watched as they would embrace each other and their lips would touch. I tilted my head curiously and pulled up another screen to search for more information. The computer familiarized me with how this was their way of communicating what they called love.
    I had no idea what that was, but mothers and fathers, sons and daughters, mates and friends would touch their lips to different parts of the others’ bodies - mostly on the face, but sometimes hands, neck, and shoulders. I scrunched my nose. It didn’t make sense.
    As the clips flashed quickly through the different kisses it had on file, I began to wonder how lips, without words, communicated so strongly.   It had been my experience--
   “Finding me interesting now?” Creature inquired in a false kindness.
   I quickly turned my head to see he was standing a couple of feet away. I immediately stood up and faced him, hitting the switch that would turn off my research.
    His eyes shifted to the inky black universe. When his eyes focused back on me, there was fire in them.  “Where are we?” he asked, and I glanced down at the screen that showed me.
    “Middle Of Nowhere,” I answered in his language.
    He stared at me as though he didn’t believe me.  “Is that what it’s really called?”
    “It’s what I call it in your language.”
    “And in your language…”
    I shook my head. I found it interesting that he was using a courteous tone, even when I knew he wanted to rip me apart.
    He nodded. “So, now what?” he asked casually as if I was not his enemy.
    I tilted my head curiously at him. I didn’t understand his question.
    “Well, you’ve sent fire through my body and needles through my veins.  I just wondered what you had in mind,” he calmly remarked as his eyes moved to the now blank screens before focusing back on my eyes. “Sexual experiments?”
    I made a disgusted face, and he smiled. I suddenly felt very uncomfortable. I couldn’t figure out what he wanted. He should be furious with me, but he didn’t sound like he was. He should be trying to hurt me, but he wasn’t. He could have killed me, but he didn’t.
    “I’m just trying to figure out why an alien like you would find a way for me to survive, when you’re kind has already killed so many of my people. I mean, if you think about it, you kind of saved me.”
    “No, I didn’t,” I angrily said. I did not save creatures.
    His one eyebrow went up. “No?”
    “No,” I repeated.
    “You’ve tortured me, and now you’re going to kill me?”
    “No.”
    “Well, either you’ve saved me or you’re going to kill me,” he remarked and took a slow step towards me.
    I wanted to move away from him, but I didn’t want him near my controls.  I stepped to the side and towards him, in case he was trying to intimidate me. Plus, I could still prevent him from nearing my controls. He smiled at me and I waited for his attack, but he didn’t move.
    “You haven’t clarified your intentions,” he commented, and I scowled at him.
    “I don’t have to,” I answered.
    “I suppose you don’t,” he replied nonchalantly.
    He suddenly lunged at me, and I almost got away. His fingers wrapped around my wrist, and he immediately yanked me close to him. I brought my knee into his inner thigh and as he bent over, I kneed him in the face, but he didn’t let go of my hand. He looked up at me, swallowing his pain.
    “Didn’t think I learned my lesson?” he scowled, squeezing my wrist even harder.
    I glared at him, and yanked him closer to me. His scowl became surprise. I brought my knee up and caught his outer thigh. I quickly turned my back to him, pulling him over my back and he landed solidly on the floor. He let go of my wrist and I backed away from him. He stood up, and wiped the blood off his face.
    “You are quite remarkable,” he commented. “You’re skills are much more impressive than the others. How long have you been destroying people’s worlds… lives?” he angrily asked.
    I didn’t reply, and he dove at me. I moved out of the way, but as soon as he landed he launched himself at me, slamming me into the controls. I pulled my feet up, and attempted to push him off of me. His hands grabbed my shirt and he slammed me into the controls again. I heard the alarms sound, and this time I kicked him so that his hold relaxed. I quickly kicked him away from me, and turned immediately.  The ship was beginning to fall off course, but that wasn’t why the alarm was blaring. There was another ship much too close to mine.
    Creature’s hand was on the back of my head and in the next second he had slammed my face into the controls.
    “I’m going to win this,” he stated.
    I don’t think so.  “I already told you, you won’t ever win.”

Excerpt From: Amanda Schmidt. “Solace: Uncharted Territory."

Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Jack

We are introduced to Jack in Chapter 2 when Karissa is "captured".   (Jack is my middle son's favorite guy that I have written.)  Writing Jack was easy and fun.  He is one of those guys that isn't hard to become attached to.  He grew up reading comic books (which ironically gives him a comparison to how he relates to his life among the stars) and attained the rank of Eagle Scout. (I mention these things because its important for you to understand that he has always aspired to be the best he can be.)  He's an elite soldier with a moral compass.  Which I guess explains his seriousness, but that trait does not undermine his sense of humor.   And even with these characteristics, it is his compassion and protective nature, along with his will to survive, that allows this story to evolve.  

Don't get me wrong.  Even with his amazing personality, he and Karissa don't become fast friends.  Even after the chain is put on them Jack tries to kill her.  It isn't until Chapter 7 that reality sets in for him:

     “If I was going to kill you, I’d have already done it,” he reasoned. “Which I almost did, but then I realized if you didn’t die from your wounds, I was probably going to need your help to survive this planet.”
    Ha! I was not going to help him… Although, I suppose, if he thought I was helping him and we were able to get off of this planet, I would still have a gift for Omatha.
    I watched him as he slowly sat down in front of me. As he looked me in the eye, I glanced away. My eyes followed the cord that we had been pulling on.  He wasn’t useless.  He was able to take a broken ship and make it into a safe place.
    “Look, it’s obvious that you don’t like me,” he stated, breaking me away from my thoughts, and I absently returned my attention to him.  “And trust me, when I say that I want to kill you. But right now, I’m putting that aside so that we can survive this planet.”
     At least he was honest. I knew he wanted my death – not that I blamed him. I slowly relaxed and nodded...


Excerpt From:  “Solace: Uncharted Territory.” iBooks. 

It goes with out saying that Jack is intelligent, strong, and determined.  Which he would need to be if he was going to survive not only a future in the universe, but also Karissa.  

I want to write so much more about Jack, but I think the best way to learn about Jack is to read "Solace".  Who Jack is, is so much of the story that to dive deeper into him is me retelling the story.   

Thursday, September 13, 2018

Karissa

As I said earlier, I wrote this story with the decision that I wanted to write from the bad guy's perspective.  (This is the sixth story I started, and all my other stories are written with the main character as the "good guy".)  With that in mind, writing Karissa was a little bit difficult to start.  I had to keep going back and revising the way she dealt with things.  Karissa might have been difficult to start, but once I found the right path she flowed from my mind and I ended up with this amazing woman.  (I know I should say character, but it doesn't feel right.)  She is tough and driven.  And unfortunately for her enemies, she is smart, ruthless, and amazingly gifted in combat.   What drives her most, is her need for acknowledgement from Omatha that she isn't a failure.  

Karissa is a woman with numerous sisters (both older and younger), but it is with four of her older sisters that she must compete with for Omatha's nod of approval.  Four sisters who are remarkable in every way: Jazzia, Tania, Algeas, and of course, Sarsa (her biggest rival among the sisters).  Why do her sister's give her such difficulty?  Karissa believes her biggest flaw is that she does not have the looks of Omatha.  She is, as it is said in the first chapter, too symmetrical.  She is also short, the wrong shade of green, and her eyes are not purple.

In the first chapter (which you can read here or clicking the tab above for "Solace") you meet these four sisters, and you also get a glimpse at why Karissa is the way she is.  You also get to see how strong her will is, and how fearless she is.   She hates that she has been sent to Earth - sent there because of a failure on her sisters' part, which she isn't afraid to remind them of.  She has one task to do, and she must figure out how to accomplish the task and return to Omatha with something even better than what Sarsa will have.  

One would think that with her skills and intelligence this would be easy, but where's the story in that?  



Tuesday, September 4, 2018

Writing "Solace: Uncharted Territory"

Writing "Solace: Uncharted Territory" was the easiest story I have ever written.  I'm not sure why.  All I know is that it only took me a week and a half to write it from beginning to end (obviously not including the editing by other people).  And the only inspiration I had for this book was the desire to write as the bad guy and make the love story one that started out where the main characters wanted each other dead.  

There is no music to share for this book, (in "Solace: Lost" there was, but for "Uncharted Territory" no song in particular drove the story or a specific scene, I can't even recall if I listened to any music while writing this book.     

After writing the first couple of chapters, I do remember thinking what could possibly pull these two together.  She was ruthless, and he was the epitome of a hero.  Then the idea of the chain was born... having them bound together by an unbreakable chain that only the Tirrapps (umm... as Karissa explains to Jack the best translation for what they are is Pirates) that captured them know the secret of removing it.   How to get them into a situation where this would be allowed?  Well, writing that was fun for me.  Their reactions were tricky.  On one hand she has no desire to keep him alive, except she needs to bring him to Omatha - alive.  On the other hand, he wants her dead, but she is the only one who speaks his language, knows what their options are... and more importantly needs him alive.  And thus the story of Jack and Karissa is born.  

From the moment Karissa and Jack meet their lives become a tailspin of catalysimic events that change both of their lives, hurling them both into uncharted territory.    And for Karissa, that's saying something.  A lot has happened to her during her life, but she is stubborn and set in her ways.   The only change she was hoping for was to finally appease Omatha.  Jack's life changes differently than Karissa's.  He is not her, but nothing can remain the same when you've been taken from your world.




Saturday, September 1, 2018

Month of September: Solace: Uncharted Territory

Okay so, the last two months didn't go so well.  However I am going to continue and hope I do a better job.  

This month I will be writing about "Solace: Uncharted Territory".  This was not my second book I wrote, it's actually Story 6. It is, however, the second book I published.  ðŸ˜Š


Here are the basic things about this book:
Genre: Adventure/Fanatsy/Young Adult

Age: 10 and up.
(I let my kids read them when they were 10. There is suggestive language and mild violence so it's a parental choice. My kids really enjoyed the adventure and characters as do all my fans which spread across the spectrum from preteen to seniors)
Published: 2012
What it's about: 
Here's the official blurb: 

  • Short: When I found Jack I knew that my life would change. I just didn’t expect that his desire for my death would send me on a path to accept what I had believed was evil.
  • Long: For her entire life, Karissa and her sisters have been serving Omatha. Unlike her sisters, Karissa is always being forced to take on impossible missions across the galaxy (which have brought her closer to death more times than she cares to think about). Years of living under Omatha’s rules has taught Karissa that the only way to survive is to stay focused and get each mission accomplished by any means necessary.  
Who: 
Karissa: Omathan (female)
Jack: Human (male)
Sarsa: Omathan (female)
Torrel: Zarran (male)
Omatha: Omathan (Female)
Where:
Once again we start on Earth, then the story moves to space, the Middle of Nowhere, and Omatha's fortress

I think that covers the blah blah blah part of the book, if you have questions or want more information feel free to ask.  

Saturday, August 25, 2018

"Taken: The Ytinu Srebas" one scene that was created by a song

When I was writing about the music that had a huge influence in the writing of "Taken", I mentioned a couple of scenes/songs. So I'd like to share one of them today.

First is "Never Tear Us Apart" by INXS.  If you're not familiar with the song click on "Never Tear Us Apart" for the link to it. Or click on it as you read the scene below. 😉

So here's the scene:


“He turned to me as the music faded into a new song, and his eyes locked onto mine. They were a brilliant blue that emanated strength, and I knew I’d be safe with him.

I wasn’t sure if it was the music or him, but I could feel my desire rising. He put his hand on my hip, not touching my bare skin, and we began moving with the rhythm of the music. I felt his other hand move down my body without ever touching me. We moved as one. There was no uncomfortable closeness or awkward motions, causing me to feel like we had done this before.

His hand slowly moved into my hair and he bent me back. His breath caressed my neck as he bent over me, and I closed my eyes. I could picture his blue eyes looking into mine, his worried smile. He rolled my torso up close to him again.
My body was craving his, it was overwhelming. I wanted to be so much closer. I breathed him in. I knew him, but it was only a dream… wasn’t it? Suddenly it didn’t matter, and I opened my eyes. He was leaning in close and I lost my train of thought completely. He was all that existed. 

My hands moved across his broad shoulders, one hand went to the back of his neck the other touched the side of his face. I could feel a strong sensation coursing through my entire body, I felt the need to have him closer. His eyes stared into mine, and I could feel what felt like agony. I felt it so strongly that there were tears brimming my eyes. His lips pressed against the palm of my hand, releasing the most amazing sensation I had felt since I woke up. I knew that he wanted only to be with me, and that… 

“I will keep you safe,” he whispered in a voice that was all too familiar. 

Tears were sliding down my cheeks, everything about me needed him. His face moved within inches of mine, his eyes were so blue I thought that they were glowing. He brushed his lips against mine, and I closed my eyes to the sensation that set my soul on fire. I felt him regretfully pull away.


(Excerpt From: Amanda Schmidt. “Taken: Blades of the Ytinu Srebas (Book 2).” iBooks.) 


Now I don't know if you can feel it like I do, (I hope you can) because still to this day, when that song plays this scene is ignited as though it was my memory instead of something I created for a story.     


Wednesday, August 15, 2018

August

I can't believe it is the middle of August. I went camping in the U.P. near Porcupine Mountains and time just isn't the same up there. I highly recommend going to the Porcupine Mountains if you love nature, hiking, camping...   Now I know I've said for a long time that hiking above Pictured Rocks is my favorite place. However, I think I might have changed my mind. The trails in the Porcupines are steeper and more forested, and just as, if not more, beautiful. 








I apologize for halting my posts on here. Along with hiking and camping I've also been working on Story 20 (adding more details and flow to the story). And I'm finally working on Story 16 again. I am fixing the edits I received from 2 of my 3 editors. (I'm hoping to have this one ready for publishing November-ish.) Unfortunately I still have to create a title and cover art  .  And as soon as I get that project set, I'm going return to fixing the edits/revisions I've made to the printed manuscript for story 10 (When I finish that, I am hoping it will be ready for editors).

And finally, for the rest of August I am going to remain on the story "Taken" and slide into Book 2: "Taken: Blades of the Ytinu Srebas". (It is also the the second book I wrote and published.) 

Here are all the basic things about book 2:

Genre: Adventure/Contemporary Fanatsy/Young Adult
Age: 10 and up.
(I let my kids read them when they were 10. There is suggestive language and mild violence so it's a parental choice. My kids really enjoyed the adventure and characters as do all my fans which spread across the spectrum from preteen to seniors)

Published: 2012

What it's about:
The official blurb: Ava was taken from the world she knew, tortured, trained, and almost killed by Will - a power-hungry Lanigiro. Wasn’t she? Ava awakens in the world that should feel like home with her best friend Ashley by her bedside, but it’s not right, something is missing. Ava is not at all certain about what has happened, but one thing is for sure her life has forever changed.

Who (origin/gender):
Ava (Earth woman)
Gabriel (Trinnatium man)
Jake (Lanigiro man)
Lisa (Trinnatiu woman)
Will (Lanigiro man)
Naliak (Lanigiro man)
Ashely (Earth woman)
Ben (Earth man)

Where:
Earth

Thursday, July 26, 2018

A few things about writing the people of Taken

A few funny and interesting things about creating the people for "Taken":

I only knew that I wanted Ava and Gabriel to be the Eternal Love for the other... a love at first sight (sort of) romance.  

Ava and Gabriel were also the only people who didn't go too astray from what I had originally seen for them.

It took me forever to figure out Gabriel's name which gave me the idea to keep his name from Ava for the first few chapters.  (It was my first book and I found naming the characters as hard as naming my children.)

Lisa was supposed to become Ava's best friend after Ava was Taken.

Lisa was supposed to be Gabriel's sister.

Jake was not going to be as pivotal of a person.  He just had a few parts when I began, but as I continued writing, he just kind of wouldn't let himself disappear.

Will...  well, Will ended up not being who I expected either.  I mean I knew he was the bad guy, but I did not understand what really drove him until closer to then end of the second book.

Ava's, umm, Alter Ego (I guess you could say), Rage, was not an inkling of a thought.  It was in a revision that I realized it had been created.  (Always a joy when that happens and you have to figure out how to write it in properly both before and after the realization of the existence... especially the first time.)

Naliak was written just to be an Elder, however he became so much more.  He really took on the idea of ageless wisdom.  (The wisdom of the old with a young face.)




Wednesday, July 18, 2018

The music for "Taken"

I'll be honest, I can't remember how the specific music I listened to became a part of the writing, but Taken was written under the strong influence of Evanescence.  I listened to Evanescence's albums "Fallen" and "The Open Door" repeatedly.  I, of course, had my own playlist of music that I mixed in as well, but it was nothing compared to Evanescence.  (I often wish I had written down the titles in the playlist I had listened to, but I did not.  Who knew that one day I would want to give credit to each song.  ðŸ˜Š  )

In "Marks of the Satrii", the music helped me see the story... clearer?  I guess clearer is the right word.  I'm not really sure how to explain it.   I definitely did not sit down and write up an outline.  I couldn't have if I wanted to.  I had no idea what the details were until I wrote it (But I'll get into that more later).   With that being said, the music really influenced, or perhaps encouraged my mind to see more details is a better way to say it.  I say music because even though almost all the music I listened to had words, I didn't always hear what was actually being sung.  In my head the vocals became another instrument which created an even more beautiful peace of music, and allowed the imagery in my mind to flow.  For me, writing "Taken" was like watching a movie (as it is with every book I've written).  I wasn't creating a story, I was sharing it.  I'd be staring at the computer screen, listening to music.  But really, the world around me fell away, and instead of seeing a screen full of words and hearing the vocals of a song, I saw images and felt the emotions of the people in it.  (Which is why I tend to refer to the "characters" as voices in my head.)   Do I always listen to music when I write?  For "Taken", yes.  Looking back I can't remember not having music playing while I was writing.  (Now, that isn't true for all my stories - most, but not all.  Sometimes I prefer the silence.)  Even when my kids were sleeping, I'd have one of my earphones in.

There are two songs in particular that actually influenced a scene in the story, but they both happened in book two "Blades of the Ytinu Srebas".  And I will share those scenes next month when I get more into the second book.   Although, I'm quite confident that I've talked about it before, because whenever I hear the song, I can remember the scene perfectly: what was happening, the emotions, the scenery...  And well that's something I love sharing, because to me it's real.    

It's kind of strange how the first book "Marks of the Satrii" was written in a general flow of music, but the second book "Blades of the Ytinu Srebas" has scenes where the music became so much more. 😄

Tuesday, July 10, 2018

Inspirations for "Taken"

The inspiration to write Taken came from... Well there were a lot of things that inspired me to write Taken: a book I read, the people around me, needing an escape, my desire to believe in an eternal love, music...  

How did a book inspire me? Well, I happen to have read a Young Adult book that I very much enjoyed (I really liked the author's creativity and how she thought outside the box), except there were a few parts that bothered me. They didn't just bother me, they really irked me. I kept catching myself saying "if I wrote a book, I would have..." and "She did such a good job writing blah blah blah, it doesn't make sense that she would do that" (most of my complaints had to do with the interactions of the main characters). A few people (some that agreed with me, some that didn't) said, "why don't you write a book then." I laughed. I couldn't imagine writing a book because it had been made clear to me (by many teachers) that I wasn't any good at writing. But the more I heard "maybe you should try writing a book", the more the idea began to root itself inside me.

So I began writing "Taken" in 2009, there was a lot of paranormal popularity... or maybe that was just what was in my circle of life at the time. I remember as I started writing I couldn't escape the idea of what if Vampires weren't human's at all. What if they were an alien species. I had never forgotten the love story in the movie "Bram Stroker's Dracula", the reason Dracula was born. That concept of eternal love inspired the creation of the Lanigiro people. That concept of eternal love was a huge inspiration for this book.

I never want to admit it, but I can't escape the notion that writing "Taken" was a way to bring to life a dream i needed in a reality that I saw crumbling to pieces and trapping me in the rubble. I hadn't realized it at the time. To me writing was something I just felt I wanted to do. Although I guess it's safe to say, those emotions inspired - and are laced deeply into - the story. Writing "Taken" became a Sanctuary. It allowed me to shed my broken heart and build something amazing and strong. To live vicariously through a woman whose way of life was taken from her, and instead of surrendering to that fact, she became stronger, she learned to fight, she found love. One of my favorite parts about writing this book, was that it inspired me to become a stronger person.

I think my favorite inspiration came from my oldest son, he was 9 at the time. I had already started writing "Taken". I was only a few chapters in. I always did my writing when the kids were playing with their friends, watching a movie, sleeping. I'd like to say that I was just an awesome mom and since they didn't need me, I might as well be writing. But the truth is, I was embarrassed that I had started writing. I didn't want anyone to know. It was just something I would do because I wanted to. Well, one day Patrick walked in on me writing and immediately asked me what I was doing. I of course didn't know what to say, so I just stared at him until the word nothing found its way out of my mouth. He moved closer to me and the computer. He glanced at the screen and then me. I reluctantly told him I was writing. He inquired what I was writing. I shrugged, and said just writing. He must have been reading the screen, because he says "You're writing a book?!" I quickly replied, "No. Not a book, just writing." He says, "You're going to be famous!" "No, I doubt that," I assured him. He proudly told me, "But you could be." The smile on his face, the confidence that he spoke with inspired me to dream a little bigger, and actually think about publishing a book.

So there are some of the inspirations for "Taken". There are some scenes that have their own inspiration... Most of which came from music. (But I think I blog about that another day ;) )

Saturday, July 7, 2018

Writing for the month of July

For the month of July I am going to focus on my book "Taken: Marks of the Satrii" because it is the first book I wrote. 
Here are the basic things about this book:
Genre: Adventure/Contemporary Fanatsy/Young Adult
Age: 10 and up.
(I let my kids read them when they were 10. There is suggestive language and mild violence so it's a parental choice. My kids really enjoyed the adventure and characters as do all my fans which spread across the spectrum from preteen to seniors)
Published: 2011
What it's about: 
A guy and a woman. (Hee Hee) Here's the official blurb: Ava's day started out just like every other. She had no idea that when her best friend, Ashley, told her they were going out for a "girl's night" that her very normal life was about to take a turn that she never saw coming. She runs to the woods to escape the reality that she doesn't want to face, only to be hunted by shadows that shouldn't be there.
Who: 
Ava (Earth woman)
Gabriel (Trinnatium man) 
Jake (Lanigiro man)
Lisa (Trinnatiu woman)
Will (Lanigiro man)
Naliak (Lanigiro man)
Where:
The story takes place on Earth, but only in the first chapter. After that we are taken to the world of the Lanigiro, which I'll get into more details later.  
I think that covers the blah blah blah part of the book, if you have questions or want more information feel free to ask.